Crospic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Oxob Origins]

This is great! Story needs improvement though.

[Niles n' Sakura]

Quality stuff!!

[Stiks Skits]

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh.

yes :)

[Wallrider]

This has got to be the greatest story I've ever seen for a long time!

Not enough justice to be honest!!!!!!!!!!!

[No Brakes]

Here is my interpretation of the film.

The things in our world is systematic. This system is placed to balance things out. Since time exists to humans, we are always on a rush against time. We all need to get to where we need to be at a certain time, along with other people around us.
But what if our expectations failed to deliver?
We mostly get frustrated, stressed out, annoyed.

Of course, this interpretation is not the law.

[Sleep Potatoes]

After watching the entire film, I don't think it's fair that you are not getting a proper critique. Especially how you worked very hard on this film. Like 2 years?! That is some commitment!! I'll first point out all the things that are good about it.
1. The pacing of the film is done to perfection.
2. I like how you tried to make it look 3D.
3. Voice acting was excellent.
4. Some parts were ambitious, like the dreaming part.
5. Your commitment.

But of course, I'm not that type of person that thinks that everything is good about it, and those who disagree must burn in a furnace!
I can understand why people aren't really appreciating the work.

First of all, the story is cliche. I don't think a family documentation is worthy of a story: Especially when it is 30 minutes long.
Something that is cliche can translate to boring. This quite possibly means that many people didn't stick around to watch the whole thing.

Characters are okay: I guess people just find it that way.

The film is long but simple: There is not much to say about it honestly.
But don't feel let down, just do the things you enjoy doing!

Good luck

SuperCodeman responds:

Thank you for your feedback! I'll take it the advice by heart, writing really isn't my strongest point so I should try focus on that.

[Unrust]

You know; the very jittery animation is telling me that you may have tried to copy some of the moves.
But whatever, it's alright.

[Soft Warehouse]

:D
this is pretty good.
Live in Straya myself.

[United Games!]

What!? Why haven't I discovered this?

[Battle for Goldshire ZX]

the first movie posted in 2001...
14 years old...

🤔

Orangebeef responds:

mad?